What is your subject? What is your assignment?
And I suspect you mean proposition, not preposition.
Can someone check this for me, i have an exam tomorrow!
I have came up with a good preposition that will highly benefit the residents as well as the tourists.The major concern of the region is the ramshackle buildings in the town;this will not attract the tourists! nevertheless, putting my suggestion foward will increase the wealth of the nation, Hopefully the residents will agree to it.
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It's not an assignment I'm answering a past paper to prepare myself for the exam
Your paragraph doesn't say anything. You don't explain what your good idea is.
Building new,stable houses and shops
Then you need to say that in your paragraph. Otherwise, as Ms. Sue notes, it makes no sense at all. What would you do? Tear down old buildings and build new ones? Rehab existing, run-down structures? Be clear about your great idea.