Does it make sense?
Scrambled out of the car indicates that the writer was fascinated and curious to see a sloth making it's way down the tree. He couldn't resist the oppoturnity of seeing a sloth.
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as he was on a holiday...
Is part of that a quotation? If so, you need quotation marks to be clear.
Read it aloud 2 or 3 times. Revise. Repost.
Read it aloud 2 or 3 times. Revise. Repost.
There's also a pronoun error. See it??
NO?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/notorious.htm
Scroll down and take note!
Scroll down and take note!
Also, make sure your spell-checker is turned on so you don't have things like this:"oppoturnity" !!