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Does it make sense?
Scrambled out of the car indicates that the writer was fascinated and curious to see a sloth making it's way down the tree. He couldn't resist the oppoturnity of seeing a sloth.
Answered by help
as he was on a holiday...
Answered by Writeacher
Is part of that a quotation? If so, you need quotation marks to be clear.

Read it aloud 2 or 3 times. Revise. Repost.
Answered by Writeacher
There's also a pronoun error. See it??
Answered by help
NO?
Answered by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/notorious.htm

Scroll down and take note!
Answered by Writeacher
Also, make sure your spell-checker is turned on so you don't have things like this:"oppoturnity" !!
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