is this thesis good?

Question

1) Cell phones are becoming increasingly popular and are in use almost anywhere one goes.

Thank you.

Answer 1

Sounds possible, but how will you support this thesis?

Answer 2

Cell phones become increasingly popular and use almost anywhere.

Answer 3

That's not really a thesis statement because you don't take any arguable position about anything. You have stated facts, but that's about all.

Read through these -- http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html -- especially the first two.

Then try again.