Is sentence 1 an assignment about a potential or imaginary trip? If so, then the wording is fine; if not, then you need a past tense for the main verb.
1. What will you do if you visit one of the four cities? Write a short passage about your trip.
I made changes here. Check carefully:
2. What would you like to do if you were to visit one of the four cities in this passage? Write a short essay telling about your trip in 10 sentences or more.
This is fine.
3. If you travel to one of the four cities, what will you do? Write what to do in the city in more than 10 sentences.
1. What will you do if you visit one of the four cities? Write a short passage about your trip.
2. What would you like to do if you visit one among the four cities in this passage? Write a short essay related to the trip with more than 10 sentences.
3. If you travel to one of the four cities, what will you do? Write what to do in the city by using more than 10 sentences.
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Would you chceck the short passages? Correct errors, please. Thank you. •English - Writeacher, Saturday, September 17, 2016 at 7:01am
#1 will make sense if you change the future tense to past tense in the question.
#2 and #3 are very good.
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(Thank you for your help. What about using the preposition 'in'?)
1. What will you do if you visit one of the four cities? Write a short passage about your trip.
2. What would you like to do if you visit one among the four cities in this passage? Write a short essay related to the trip in more than 10 sentences.
3. If you travel to one of the four cities, what will you do? Write what to do in the city in more than 10 sentences.
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