Question

1. It was his fault that he didn't put a leash on his dog.

2. He should have walked his dog with a leash on.

3. He should have walked the dog with a leash on his collar.

4. It was his mistake that his didn't tie his dog to the collar. He should have used a dog lead.

5. By mistake, he didn't prepared a dog lead. A dog lead should be put on a dog outside.

6. He didn't keep an eye on the pet when they went for a walk. They were busy talking with each other.

(Would you check the sentences? Thank you.)

Answer 1

1. It was his fault that he didn't put a leash on his dog. <b>OK</b>

2. He should have walked his dog with a leash on. <b>With a leash on what? His belt? The dog's collar? Or what?</b>

3. He should have walked the dog with a leash on his collar. <b>OK</b>

4. It was his mistake that his didn't tie the lead to the dog's collar. He should have used a dog lead. <b>I made changes.</b>

5. By mistake, he didn't <b>put the dog on a</b> lead. A dog lead should be put on a dog outside. <b>OK</b>

6. He didn't keep an eye on the pet when they went for a walk. They were busy talking with each other. <b>OK, mostly, but who are "They"?</b>

Answer 2

In #4, "his" should be "he."