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I need 6 people for this game. ...
I have prepared sheets of paper. There is an English alphabet on each sheet of paper. It is a name tag. I'll paste two sheets of paper on your lothes:one on the back, and the other on the chest. You are A, Your are B. Your name is C. Your name is D. You are E. You are F. You should stand in a circle facing each other. You should move quickly according to my directions or statement. You should change your positions or places. You have to go to the right position. For example, if I say,"A is across from D,' D shoud move to the opposite of A. They should look at each other in a circle. You should do as you are told. D is between B and C. A is between E and F. D, you should stand on C's left side. F, stand on A's right. OK. Well done. Good job. Go back to your seat.

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Writeacher
I need 6 people for this game. ...
I have prepared sheets of paper<b>, and on each one there is a letter of the English alphabet. Use it like a name tag.</b> I'll <b>place</b> two sheets of paper on your <b>clothes: one on the back, and the other on the front.</b> <b>You are A. You are B.</b> Your name is C. Your name is D. You are E. You are F. You should <b>all</b> stand in a circle facing each other <b>and move</b> quickly according to my directions or statement. <b>You will need to change <b>places and go to the right position, according to my directions.</b> For example, if I say,<b><~~add a space after the comma</b> "A is across from D,<b>" then D should move to</b> the opposite of A. They should look at each other <b>as they stand in the</b> circle. <b>Follow my directions carefully.</b> D is between B and C. A is between E and F. D, you should stand on C's left side. F, stand on A's right. OK. Well done. Good job. Go back to your seat. </b>
Writeacher
Actually ... since the rest of the paragraph is addressing the gameplayers as "you," I think this sentence should be changed:

"They should look at each other as they stand in the circle."

to

You should look at each other as you stand in the circle.

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