Asked by Larry

Laughing and giggling throughout most of the story, the students weren’t just engaged—they were also amused.

How can I fix that sentence? Or is it ok?
Answered by bobpursley
It is terrible.
Laughing and giggling ...., the students were both engaged and amused.
Answered by Larry
Way to be blunt :-P.. Thanks for your help though.
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