Asked by Victoria
                Is this grammatically correct? I mean, it is alright for me to write who "one of them" is in an entirely new sentence? Is it considered a sentence fragment and therefore grammatically incorrect? 
"By one look of his now unnaturally light pupils, she could tell that he had become one of them. A slave to the parasite that overrode his mind and controlled every movement of his body."
            
        "By one look of his now unnaturally light pupils, she could tell that he had become one of them. A slave to the parasite that overrode his mind and controlled every movement of his body."
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            Carpe_Diem
            
    This is absolutely correct!
    
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