Asked by i love polka
how can i put this in a much better sentence?
Their acquaintance starts off unpleasantly but Elizabeth’s personality catches Mr. Darcy’s heart and finds himself attracted to her.
Their acquaintance starts off unpleasantly but Elizabeth’s personality catches Mr. Darcy’s heart and finds himself attracted to her.
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Answered by
Writeacher
More concise language and construction. Try something like this:
Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy's acquaintance starts off pleasantly, but soon Mr. Darcy finds himself strongly attracted to Elizabeth because of her ____ personality.
(You determine the adjective you want to put in before "personality.")
Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy's acquaintance starts off pleasantly, but soon Mr. Darcy finds himself strongly attracted to Elizabeth because of her ____ personality.
(You determine the adjective you want to put in before "personality.")
Answered by
Writeacher
[Well, that's not much more concise, but the clauses and phrases are less flip-floppy all over the place!]
Answered by
justine
I think it's NICE .
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