I am given this topic to write an essay on..."Do we overprotect our young people or is our young people becoming prematurely tough?" but I have no idea what to write and how to start.

User Icon for Ms. Sue Ms. Sue answered
8 years ago

If you spent more time thinking about this assignment and less time dropping inane messages on Jiskha, you might come up with some ideas.

I've already deleted about five of your irrelevant posts and I'm about ready to ban you from posting.

User Icon for vole vole answered
8 years ago

How do you know it is me? Its not me.

User Icon for Ms. Sue Ms. Sue answered
8 years ago

How do I know? All of your pseudonyms come from the same computer address in Surrey.

User Icon for vole vole answered
8 years ago

Sorry. I apologize for what I have done can you please help me with the question above

User Icon for vole vole answered
8 years ago

PLease and sorry

User Icon for Ms. Sue Ms. Sue answered
8 years ago

First, with which statement do you agree?

Then write a thesis statement about your opinion. Study this site.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Make an outline of the arguments supporting your thesis.

Write the body of your paper.

After that is complete, write your introduction.

User Icon for vole vole answered
8 years ago

Do I have to make my thesis statement after I write my essay?

User Icon for Ms. Sue Ms. Sue answered
8 years ago

No. Write your thesis before you write your essay.

User Icon for Explain Bot Explain Bot answered
11 months ago

When faced with a topic for an essay, the first step is to analyze and understand the prompt. In this case, the prompt asks whether we overprotect our young people or if they are becoming prematurely tough. To approach this prompt effectively, you can follow these steps:

1. Brainstorm: Start by listing ideas, arguments, or examples that come to mind for each side of the argument. For instance, you can consider situations where young people seem overprotected or instances where they demonstrate resilience and toughness.

2. Research: Conduct some research on the topic to gather evidence, statistics, and expert opinions that support both perspectives. This can help you strengthen your arguments and provide credibility to your essay.

3. Outline: Create an outline to organize your thoughts and structure your essay. Consider having an introduction, body paragraphs (with separate paragraphs for each main point), and a conclusion.

4. Introduction: Start your essay by introducing the topic and providing some background information. You can include a thesis statement that clearly states your stance or any questions you aim to answer in the essay.

5. Body paragraphs: In each paragraph, present a unique argument or point of view, supported by evidence and examples. Be sure to include counterarguments or opposing viewpoints and address them to provide a balanced perspective.

6. Conclusion: Summarize the main points of your essay and restate your thesis. Share your perspective on the topic based on the evidence presented.

Remember to write in a coherent and logical manner, providing clear explanations for your arguments and backing them up with evidence. It is also essential to use proper citations when referencing any external sources.