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132 years later in present-day Connecticut, Two teenage boys named Allen Ryder and Aiden Synth were reading the legend, thinking of it as a joke, “What a bunch of malarkey” said Allen, “You said it, bro” said Aiden. Just then, Allen’s phone received a message saying to all disbelievers to go to the Dudley Town Forest to find the legendary Wilbur T. Spydersson! “Hey, look at this” said Allen as he showed the message to Aiden, “No way, I got the same message as well” said Aiden. “Wait a minute, how did we get this message at the same time and how did it know that we thought the legend was a fake?” said Allen, sounding skeptical. “Maybe it's just coincidence, and besides, it might be a party or a corny festival, it could be fun,” said Aiden convincingly. “I don’t kno– come on mr. buzzkill” said Allen as he was interrupted by aiden. “Alright, let's do it– Yes, you won't regret this,” said Allen as he started having second thoughts as his friend ran home to get dressed for the occasion.

As Allen put on his dashing black suit, his stepmother came into the room saying “What are you doing, where are you going, ARE YOU GOING ON A DATE, I will not stand for this” said his stepmother Rachael Elderbottom acting like the stepmother from Cinderella. “Chillax, I’m going to a party, I’m going formal, and you do know that no girl is interested in a nerd like me!” said Allen. “Yeah, that is true… welp have fun,” said Rachael. Allen said nothing to that, Rachael usually says no to everything he says, but this is his chance to have some real fun in years, so he left the house and got into his car. As Allen left, Rachael went into her bratty daughters room and said “Get up and follow your brother, he is such a terrible liar and has been sneaking off lately, and if you succeed in capturing him, I’ll give you all of the money you want” Said Rachael to her daughter Prudence Elderbottom, a bratty, intelligent, snobby, 16 year old girl who only care for herself and her success than others.

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132 years later, in present-day Connecticut, two teenage boys named Allen Ryder and Aiden Synth were chuckling over a local legend. “What a bunch of malarkey,” Allen scoffed. “You said it, bro,” Aiden replied, laughing as they flipped through the pages of an old book. Just then, Allen’s phone buzzed with an unexpected message that read: “To all disbelievers: come to Dudley Town Forest to find the legendary Wilbur T. Spydersson!”

“Hey, check this out,” Allen said, showing the screen to Aiden. “No way, I got the same message!” Aiden exclaimed, wide-eyed.

“Wait a sec, how’d we both get this at the same time? And how did it know we thought the legend was a joke?” Allen's skepticism was clear.

“Maybe it’s just a coincidence! It could be a party or some corny festival. It might actually be fun!” Aiden insisted, trying to convince his friend.

“I don’t kno—” Allen started, but Aiden cut him off with excitement. “Alright, let’s do it! You won’t regret this!” As Aiden dashed home to get ready, Allen couldn’t shake his unease.

When Allen finally slipped into his dapper black suit, his stepmother, Rachael Elderbottom, barged into his room. “What are you doing? Where are you going? ARE YOU GOING ON A DATE? I will not stand for this!” she exclaimed, channeling the drama of a fairy tale villain.

“Chill, Rachael—you make it sound like I'm sneaking off to a secret rendezvous! I’m going to a party! Besides, you know no girl is interested in a nerd like me!” Allen replied, exasperated.

“Yeah, that is true… well, have fun,” Rachael said with a dismissive wave.

Allen raised an eyebrow but didn’t respond. This rare chance for adventure was too good to pass up, so he hurried out the door and into his car. Little did he know, Rachael had other plans. She stomped over to her spoiled daughter Prudence’s room and bellowed, “Get up and follow your brother. He’s been lying through his teeth and sneaking off lately. If you catch him, I’ll give you whatever money you want!”

Prudence, a bratty, intelligent, and self-serving 16-year-old, rolled her eyes but felt a flicker of intrigue at the prospect of getting her hands on her brother’s secret. After all, success was sweeter when it came at the expense of someone else.

As Allen made it to Dudley Town Forest, he saw at least ten people and Aiden at the so-called party/corny festival. “Allen, you made it… I didn’t expect your mom to let you go” said Aiden, “yeah well, like you said, when you see an opening, you take it” said Allen. Just then, a girl came to the boys area and said “Hiya fellas” , said the girl. “OH uh hi Haibey– I mean Hailey” said Aiden nervously, “ hi Hailey, what are you doing here” said Allen who seemingly was not interested in her. “What do you mean, I’m here for the so–called legend, Wilba T. scorpiosson” said Hailey Hartson, who is the hottest and kindest person in school and grabbed the attention of everyone’s eyes except for Allen Ryder. “You mean Wilbur T. Spydersson, My clueless Honeypie” said Hailey’s boyfriend and Aiden's nemesis Arthur Arkson. “Well, if it isn’t the Aidiot and the famous Allen Ryder, nice to finally meet you, my good sir and aiden… not so much” said Arthur to Allen nicely and to Aiden rudely.

As they chatted and laughed, a man in a red cloak with a spider emblem came and said “come this way, disbelievers and prepare thyselves to confront death”. We followed the man as we thought he was going to take us on a tour, but something was wrong with Allen as he felt that one by one the others were… disappearing. As they reached the end, there were only four left, then the man said “MAY YOU HAVE LUCK” as the ground collapsed below them and fell into a dungeon with the others. Just then a video appeared on their phones revealing a spider as it said “ WELCOME DISBELIEVERS, TO MY DUNGEON OF DEBTORS!” said the creature. “Where are we, what are we doing here, why are we here, who or what are you, and why is it called the dungeon of debtors," said Allen, questioning nonstop. “Ooh, a lot of questions, I’ll do my best to answer them, Allen” said the creature, then Allen said “how–how do you know my– I know everything about you, Allen” said Allen the the creature

As Allen pulled into Dudley Town Forest, he was met with a scene that felt more like a backyard gathering than a legendary event. About ten people were milling around, and there stood Aiden, waving him over. “Allen, you made it! I didn’t think your mom would let you come,” Aiden exclaimed.

“Yeah, well, like you said, when you see an opening, you take it,” Allen replied, forcing a smile despite his lingering doubts.

Just then, a girl strolled over to them, her confident demeanor drawing the attention of everyone nearby. “Hiya, fellas!” she chimed brightly.

“Oh, uh, hi, Haibey—I mean Hailey,” Aiden stammered, his nervousness apparent.

“Hey, Hailey! What brings you out here?” Allen asked, trying to maintain his indifference.

“What do you mean? I’m here for the so-called legend, Wilba T. Scorpiosson,” replied Hailey Hartson, the kindest and most popular girl in school, completely soaking up the spotlight.

“It’s Wilbur T. Spydersson, my clueless Honeypie,” came a smug voice from behind her. It was Hailey’s boyfriend and Aiden's nemesis, Arthur Arkson. “Well, if it isn’t the Aidiot and the famous Allen Ryder. Nice to finally meet you, my good sir... and Aiden, not so much,” Arthur quipped, his tone dripping with sarcasm.

As they bantered, a man draped in a red cloak adorned with a spider emblem approached. “Come this way, disbelievers, and prepare thyselves to confront death,” he announced dramatically. Intrigued but uneasy, they followed him, under the impression that a tour awaited them. However, Allen couldn't shake the feeling of dread creeping in as he noticed one by one, the others began to... disappear.

By the time they reached the end of the path, only four remained—Allen, Aiden, Hailey, and Arthur. Suddenly, the cloaked man turned to them and bellowed, “MAY YOU HAVE LUCK!” In an instant, the ground beneath them crumbled, plunging them into a dark, dank dungeon.

When the dust settled, the atmosphere shifted. Their phones flickered to life, revealing the ominous figure of a giant spider on the screen. “WELCOME, DISBELIEVERS, TO MY DUNGEON OF DEBTORS!” the creature announced, its voice echoing unnaturally.

“Where are we? What are we doing here? Why are we here? Who or what are you? And why is this called the Dungeon of Debtors?” Allen fired off a barrage of questions, his mind racing with fear.

“Ooh, quite a lot of questions! I’ll do my best to answer them, Allen,” the spider replied, its voice sinister yet gleeful.

“Wait, how do you know my name?” Allen stammered, his heart pounding in his chest.

“I know everything about you, Allen,” the creature said, a grin stretching across its eight eyes.

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As Allen pulled into Dudley Town Forest, he was met with a scene that felt more like a backyard gathering than a legendary event. About ten people were milling around, and there stood Aiden, waving him over with excitement. “Allen, you made it! I didn’t think your mom would let you come,” Aiden exclaimed cheerfully. Allen shrugged, forcing a smile despite his lingering doubts, “Yeah, well, like you said, when you see an opening, you take it.” Just then, a girl with a confident smile approached, catching everyone’s attention. “Hiya, fellas!” she called out brightly, making Aiden stutter nervously.

“Oh, uh, hi, Haibey—I mean Hailey,” Aiden said awkwardly, clearly flustered. “Hey, Hailey! What brings you out here?” Allen asked, trying to play it cool. “What do you mean? I’m here for the so-called legend, Wilba T. Scorpiosson,” replied Hailey Hartson, the sweetest and most popular girl in school. “It’s Wilbur T. Spydersson, my clueless Honeypie,” a smug voice chimed in from behind her. It was Arthur Arkson, Hailey's boyfriend and Aiden's long-time rival. “Well, if it isn’t the Aidiot and the famous Allen Ryder. Nice to finally meet you, my good sir... and Aiden, not so much,” Arthur said sarcastically, his arrogance palpable.

As the group exchanged banter, a man in a red cloak with a spider emblem stepped forward, drawing their attention. “Come this way, disbelievers, and prepare thyselves to confront death,” he announced dramatically. Intrigued but uneasy, the group followed him, expecting a tour of sorts. However, Allen noticed with mounting dread that one by one, others began to disappear into the shadows. By the time they reached the end of the path, only four of them were left: Allen, Aiden, Hailey, and Arthur. Suddenly, the cloaked man turned to them, shouting, “MAY YOU HAVE LUCK!”

In an instant, the ground beneath them crumbled, sending them cascading into a dark, damp dungeon. When the dust settled, a sinister atmosphere engulfed them, amplifying their confusion and fear. Their phones flickered to life, revealing a giant spider’s image on the screen. “WELCOME, DISBELIEVERS, TO MY DUNGEON OF DEBTORS!” the creature announced, its voice echoing through the chamber. “Where are we? What are we doing here? Why are we here? Who or what are you? And why is this called the Dungeon of Debtors?” Allen shot off a flurry of questions, desperation creeping into his voice. The spider grinned ominously, “Ooh, quite a lot of questions! I’ll do my best to answer them, Allen.”

“But wait, how do you know my name?” Allen stammered, his heart racing. The creature’s multiple eyes gleamed with malice as it replied, “I know everything about you, Allen.” Allen exchanged a worried glance with Aiden, who had gone pale. Hailey looked nervously between them, while Arthur tried to maintain his bravado, though the fear was palpable. Clutching his phone tightly, Allen felt the weight of their predicament settling heavily in the pit of his stomach. The ominous atmosphere thickened as the reality of their situation began to sink in.

“Your name is Allen Webster Ryder, your mother died at childbirth, your rich father married a rich woman, then your father died on his honeymoon when he cut himself and jumped into a pool filled with great white sharks while trying to impress your new stepmother, all that is left of him is a thumbed-up hand just like in one of the terminator movies, then you became famous as the curse of Ryder” said the creature, with everyone shocked with Allens dark and sad backstory.

“Your name is Allen Webster Ryder. Your mother died at childbirth, and your rich father remarried a wealthy woman. Tragically, your father met his end on his honeymoon when he foolishly tried to impress your new stepmother by diving into a pool filled with great white sharks—cuts and all,” the creature said, its voice dripping with malice. “All that remained of him was a thumbed-up hand, just like in one of those Terminator movies.” A haunting silence enveloped the dungeon as the weight of the creature’s words sunk in.

Allen stood frozen, his heart racing as he grasped the gravity of the situation. Aiden’s eyes widened in shock, while Hailey covered her mouth in disbelief. Even Arthur, typically so confident, appeared momentarily stunned by the revelation. “You became infamous as the Curse of Ryder,” the creature continued, its eyes gleaming with sinister amusement. The truth of his past hung heavy in the air, leaving Allen feeling exposed and vulnerable for the first time in years.

In Connecticut, 1869, a 9 year old boy named Wilbur T. Spydersson developed a fascination with arachnids, leading him to become an arachnologist at the age of 32. Obsessed with the idea of transforming into one of these eight-legged creatures, he sought out a mysterious cult rumored to worship arachnids and perform transformative rituals. After failing to find the cult, Wilbur returned home, only to be kidnapped by them. He awoke during a dark ritual dedicated to their god, Arachnos. As the chanting intensified, he felt himself changing—his limbs multiplying, as well as his eyes and mouth as he transformed into a spider. The cult believed they had created a vessel for their god, and Wilbur, finally realizing his dream, embraced his new form. To this day, the legend says that the cult still worships him, eager to please their arachnid god.

132 years later in present-day Connecticut, Two teenage boys named Allen Ryder and Aiden Synth were reading the legend, thinking of it as a joke, “What a bunch of malarkey” said Allen, “You said it, bro” said Aiden. Just then, Allen’s phone received a message saying to all disbelievers to go to the Dudley Town Forest to find the legendary Wilbur T. Spydersson! “Hey, look at this” said Allen as he showed the message to Aiden, “No way, I got the same message as well” said Aiden. “Wait a minute, how did we get this message at the same time and how did it know that we thought the legend was a fake?” said Allen, sounding skeptical. “Maybe it's just coincidence, and besides, it might be a party or a corny festival, it could be fun,” said Aiden convincingly. “I don’t kno– come on mr. buzzkill” said Allen as he was interrupted by aiden. “Alright, let's do it– Yes, you won't regret this,” said Allen as he started having second thoughts as his friend ran home to get dressed for the occasion.

As Allen put on his dashing black suit, his stepmother came into the room saying “What are you doing, where are you going, ARE YOU GOING ON A DATE, I will not stand for this” said his stepmother Rachael Elderbottom acting like the stepmother from Cinderella. “Chillax, I’m going to a party, I’m going formal, and you do know that no girl is interested in a nerd like me!” said Allen. “Yeah, that is true… welp have fun,” said Rachael. Allen said nothing to that, Rachael usually says no to everything he says, but this is his chance to have some real fun in years, so he left the house and got into his car. As Allen left, Rachael went into her bratty daughters room and said “Get up and follow your brother, he is such a terrible liar and has been sneaking off lately, and if you succeed in capturing him, I’ll give you all of the money you want” Said Rachael to her daughter Prudence Elderbottom, a bratty, intelligent, snobby, 16 year old girl who only care for herself and her success than others.

As Allen made it to Dudley Town Forest, he saw at least ten people and Aiden at the so-called party/corny festival. “Allen, you made it… I didn’t expect your mom to let you go” said Aiden, “yeah well, like you said, when you see an opening, you take it” said Allen. Just then, a girl came to the boys area and said “Hiya fellas” , said the girl. “OH uh hi Haibey– I mean Hailey” said Aiden nervously, “ hi Hailey, what are you doing here” said Allen who seemingly was not interested in her. “What do you mean, I’m here for the so–called legend, Wilba T. scorpiosson” said Hailey Hartson, who is the hottest and kindest person in school and grabbed the attention of everyone’s eyes except for Allen Ryder. “You mean Wilbur T. Spydersson, My clueless Honeypie” said Hailey’s boyfriend and Aiden's nemesis Arthur Arkson. “Well, if it isn’t the Aidiot and the famous Allen Ryder, nice to finally meet you, my good sir and aiden… not so much” said Arthur to Allen nicely and to Aiden rudely.

As they chatted and laughed, a man in a red cloak with a spider emblem came and said “come this way, disbelievers and prepare thyselves to confront death”. We followed the man as we thought he was going to take us on a tour, but something was wrong with Allen as he felt that one by one the others were… disappearing. As they reached the end, there were only four left, then the man said “MAY YOU HAVE LUCK” as the ground collapsed below them and fell into a dungeon with the others. Just then a video appeared on their phones revealing a spider as it said “ WELCOME DISBELIEVERS, TO MY DUNGEON OF DEBTORS!” said the creature. “Where are we, what are we doing here, why are we here, who or what are you, and why is it called the dungeon of debtors," said Allen, questioning nonstop. “Ooh, a lot of questions, I’ll do my best to answer them, Allen” said the creature, then Allen said “how–how do you know my– I know everything about you, Allen” said Allen the the creature

“Your name is Allen Webster Ryder, your mother died at childbirth, your rich father married a rich woman, then your father died on his honeymoon when he cut himself and jumped into a pool filled with great white sharks while trying to impress your new stepmother, all that is left of him is a thumbed-up hand just like in one of the terminator movies, then you became famous as the curse of Ryder” said the creature, with everyone shocked with Allens dark and sad backstory.
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