Have you tried adverbs to modify verbs and adjectives? For example, "He walked slowly."
I hope this helps. Thanks for asking.
What are some other details that can be used in paragraph writing other than using adjectives.
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http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/paragrph.html
Use the links at the left under Writing Paragraphs to help you with the sentences inside a paragraph.
http://esl.about.com/cs/writing/ht/ht_essay.htm
Scroll down and pay close attention to 8, 9, and 10.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/sensorydetails.html
Most of your "detail" sentences need to have "sensory details" in them -- that is, they need to include description and references to as many of the five senses as you can: sight, sound, taste, touch, smell.
Use the links at the left under Writing Paragraphs to help you with the sentences inside a paragraph.
http://esl.about.com/cs/writing/ht/ht_essay.htm
Scroll down and pay close attention to 8, 9, and 10.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/sensorydetails.html
Most of your "detail" sentences need to have "sensory details" in them -- that is, they need to include description and references to as many of the five senses as you can: sight, sound, taste, touch, smell.