Question

Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph?

In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.

Answer 1

It looks good to me, but I'd change "your" to "the reader's."

Answer 2

Except for the word "your," it's a good topic sentence.

Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.

Answer 3

Please correct the spelling of "morale" to "moral."