Asked by Anna
Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph?
In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.
In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.
Answers
Answered by
Ms. Sue
It looks good to me, but I'd change "your" to "the reader's."
Answered by
Writeacher
Except for the word "your," it's a good topic sentence.
Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.
Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.
Answered by
Ms. Sue
Please correct the spelling of "morale" to "moral."
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