Five sentence paragraph. To make a perfect turkey sandwich you will need, butter knife, turkey, cheese,mayo, lettuce, tomato and two slices of bread. Next, place the mayo evenly on both side of the bread. On one slice of the bread place the cheese,turkey,lettuce,and tomato. Take the other slice of bread place it on top of the tomato. Place the sandwich on a plate cut it in half. Now you can sat down and enjoy your perfect sandwich. Can someone read it before it turn it in.
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the second sentence should be: First, place the mayo evenly on both sides of the bread. sentence three needs to have a comma between bread and place. sentence 4 should be like this: Take the other slice of bread and place it on top of the tomato. Sentence 5 should be: Place the sandwich on the plate and cut it in half. Sentence 6 is : Now you can sit down and enjoy your perfect sandwich. BTW your paragraph is six sentences, not five, it may not matter but i'm just telling you
To make a perfect turkey sandwich you will need a butter knife, sliced turkey, cheese, mayo, lettuce, tomato, and two slices of bread. Next, spread the mayo evenly on both slices of the bread. On one slice of bread, place the cheese, turkey, lettuce, and tomato. Place the other slice of bread on top of the tomato. Place the sandwich on a plate and cut it in half. Now you can sit down and enjoy your perfect sandwich.
Compare yours and mine very carefully. Do you notice all the changes I made? Do you have questions about any of the changes I made?
Compare yours and mine very carefully. Do you notice all the changes I made? Do you have questions about any of the changes I made?
To make a perfect turkey sandwich you will need a butter knife; turkey; cheese; mayo; lettuce; tomato and two slices of bread. Place the mayo evenly on both sides of the bread. On one slice of the bread, place the cheese, turkey, lettuce and tomato. Take the other slice of bread and place it on top of the tomato. To finish, cut the sandwich in half with the knife and put it on a place. Now you can sit down and enjoy your perfect sandwich.
English's punctuation in that first sentence is NOT correct!!
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