Asked by Rosey

Hi I need help creating an small English sentence response.This is what I wrote please help

I feel terribly sorry for all the library books out there. They are in such disrepair..Carelessly drawn upon and torn heartlessly. No one has even considered repairing it. Honestly...piteous.
Answered by Ms. Sue
You have two incomplete sentences.

Are you supposed to respond to this brief paragraph?

Answered by Rosey
I changed it to "I feel terribly sorry for all the library books in such disrepair...Carelessly drawn upon and heartlessly torn apart... truely piteous...Not many people cherish literature these days."

Not paragraph, it just says to respond it in a few clear sentences. "When you go to the library what do you feel about the books and it's condition?" We are given many questions and we are suppose to wrote using new words and proper English.
Answered by Ms. Sue
This an incomplete sentence:

Carelessly drawn upon and heartlessly torn apart... truely piteous...

Also -- libraries have many books that are not considered literature. I wouldn't consider the 4 or so books a week that I borrow from the library to be considered literature.

Answered by Rosey
Hmmmm.. how about now. Perhaps it's a bit more clearer? If you have any ideas on how else I can change this sentence please help.

"I feel terribly sorry for some of the library books out there...In such disrepair. Carelessly drawn upon and heartlessly torn apart... Truly piteous. Not many people cherish books these days."


Answered by Ms. Sue
You haven't corrected your sentence fragment.

Answered by Rosey
I feel terribly sorry for some of the library books that I've seen today. They are in such disrepair... People have carelessly drawn upon them or have heartlessly torn them apart. It's truly piteous. I guess not many people cherish books these days.

How about now?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yay! You've got it! :-)

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