Asked by Anonymous
Is this antithesis or just parallelism?
" more preschool- age children (about 80 a year) are killed by guns each year than police officers are killed by guns (about 50)"
" more preschool- age children (about 80 a year) are killed by guns each year than police officers are killed by guns (about 50)"
Answers
Answered by
Writeacher
Parallelism -- and unneeded repetition. If "killed by guns" toward the end of the sentence is removed, the sentence reads mor smoothly.
Answered by
Writeacher
*more smoothly*