Asked by HELP PLEASE

this sentence has faulty parallelism and i need to correct it. "Jessa is tall, slender, and has brown hair."
I think it's Jessa is tall, slender with brown hair. OR Jessa is tall and slender. She has a brown hair. What do you think? please help thank you!!
Answered by Writeacher
tall
slender
has brown hair

That is faulty because it has two adjectives and a verb phrase.

You need to make it have 3 adjectives or 3 verb phrases. Which will you choose?
Answered by help
brown hair
Answered by Writeacher
Jessa is ... brown hair. <~~??

How about this?
Jessa is tall, slender, and brunette.
Answered by help
i mean brown-haired? isnt that acceptable? well okay i'll go with your answer.. thank you so much :D
Answered by Writeacher
Yes, "brown-haired" would work, too.
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