Asked by rfvv
Why do you save money?
1. I save money to buy a fancy bike.
2. I save money to buy the MS Office program.
3. I save money to buy a Samsung galaxy 5.
4. I save money to please my parents, for they like me to save money.
5. I save money to buy a new coat.
6. I save money to enter university.
7. I save money to donate for the poor.
8. I save money to prepare for my future.
9. I save money to live comfortably when I become very old.
10. I save money to educate my children.
11. I save money to have enough money for my children to enter university in the future.
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Would you check the answers? Correct them if they contain some awkward expressions, please. Thank you.
1. I save money to buy a fancy bike.
2. I save money to buy the MS Office program.
3. I save money to buy a Samsung galaxy 5.
4. I save money to please my parents, for they like me to save money.
5. I save money to buy a new coat.
6. I save money to enter university.
7. I save money to donate for the poor.
8. I save money to prepare for my future.
9. I save money to live comfortably when I become very old.
10. I save money to educate my children.
11. I save money to have enough money for my children to enter university in the future.
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Would you check the answers? Correct them if they contain some awkward expressions, please. Thank you.
Answers
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Writeacher
In 3, put a capital G on "galaxy."
In 7, use "to the poor" instead of "for the poor."
Sentence 11 is a bit wordy. Can you say the same thing with fewer words?
<i>I save money so my children can attend university in the future.</i>
In 7, use "to the poor" instead of "for the poor."
Sentence 11 is a bit wordy. Can you say the same thing with fewer words?
<i>I save money so my children can attend university in the future.</i>