Question

How would you describe waiting at a school bus stop in third person? Also trying to use metaphors and personification.

Answer 1

Third person:
Use only nouns and 3rd person pronouns -- no "I" or "you" forms at all.
http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/pronouns-personal.htm

Writing metaphors:
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+write+metaphors&oq=how+to+write+metaphors&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i64.4194j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

Writing personification:
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+write+personification&oq=how+to+write+personification&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i64.5481j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

Even though many of those websites are referring to writing metaphors and personification in poetry, the ideas work just as well in prose.

Now ... get busy writing, and stop wasting time continuing to post this assignment on Jiskha.