Question
is this a good haiku
Spilled emotions
Slipped and fell
I’m falling for you
Spilled emotions
Slipped and fell
I’m falling for you
Answers
2phoneeeeee
and the title is watch your step
Writeacher
Sounds fine.
It has -- what? -- 12 syllables, not counting the title. Do you have a direction about the number of syllables?
http://www.google.com/search?q=haiku+definition&oq=haiku+definition&aqs=chrome..69i57.3599j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
It has -- what? -- 12 syllables, not counting the title. Do you have a direction about the number of syllables?
http://www.google.com/search?q=haiku+definition&oq=haiku+definition&aqs=chrome..69i57.3599j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
2phoneeeeee
spilled emotions
slipped and fell on the floor
im falling for you ??
that definition is confusing
slipped and fell on the floor
im falling for you ??
that definition is confusing
Writeacher
"seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"
Your first line has 4 syllables.
Your second line has 6 syllables.
Your third line now has 5 syllables.
I see no references to nature.
Or did your teacher give you different directions?
Your first line has 4 syllables.
Your second line has 6 syllables.
Your third line now has 5 syllables.
I see no references to nature.
Or did your teacher give you different directions?