Can someone extend this paragraph. Rewording and extending please..

Question

I would not let him disgrace us, disgrace himself, disgrace you. You see Annie, dear sweet Annie, My younger sister, he told me he was leaving me for someone, younger, sweeter, kinder than me. Patrick, the disgrace to all men, the abandoner of our child, his reason for leaving me was you, his one true love, and his reason for existence. Patrick claimed you returned his feelings. You must be finding his passing very hard, you loving him and all

I can't thank you again for all the help Ms. Sue :)

Answer 1

To get an extended paragraph, expand, make a strong topic sentence, and strength with facts.

This short paragraph reminds me of a soliloquy I memorized in high school 55 years ago, perhaps you should memorize it also. Before reading the poem, focus on the meaning of the first sentence.

http://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/my-last-duchess

Why do spouses kill spouses anyway?

Answer 2

Now if you miss my point, that poem, is an extension of your short paragraph, more facts, and strong topic stanza.