Do is the correct verb.
The last sentence is fine.
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Would you check the passage? Can we substitute 'play' for 'do' in the first sentence? Do you have better expressions for the last sentence? Thank you.
The last sentence is fine.
1. Read the sentence: Read the sentence carefully and try to understand its meaning. Pay attention to the subject and the action being performed.
2. Consider the context: Think about the broader context of the passage. Consider the tone, writing style, and purpose of the text. Look for clues that may indicate whether "play" is a suitable substitution for "do."
3. Look for synonyms and variations: If you are considering a substitution, look for similar verbs that could be used in the sentence. For example, in the context of sports or games, "play" is often used instead of "do."
Regarding better expressions for the last sentence, again, without the full passage, it is challenging to provide specific alternatives. However, here are a few general suggestions:
- Can you please review the passage?
- Would you mind checking the passage?
- Could you take a look at the passage, please?
- I would appreciate it if you could proofread the passage.
- Can you provide feedback on the passage?
Please provide more context or the full passage if you would like a more accurate analysis or specific alternative expressions.