Asked by Sweet Pea

Misplaced and dangling modifiers
Having won more than $200,000 during her career, her performances include victories in over 20 tournaments.

I think it would be better...
During her career, her performances include victories in over 20 tournaments winning more than 200,000.
? Is this correct
Answered by Writeacher
200,000 what?
Answered by Sweet Pea
If I put a dollar sign in front of $200,000 would it be correct.
Answered by Writeacher
Almost.

You also need a comma after "tournaments."
Answered by Writeacher
Well, wait a minute...
Answered by Writeacher
Did the tournaments win $200,000?
Answered by Sweet Pea
no, the tournaments did not win
Answered by Sweet Pea
What about this?

Having won more than $200,000 during her career, she has been victorious in more than 20 tournaments.
Answered by Writeacher
Super!
Answered by Sweet Pea
oh good
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