Question

After we settled to the United States, my dad got a job in a factory in North

Miami and my mom cleaned homes for a living. As for me, Maria X, I am currently a

well renound doctor. We risked a lot to get here, but at least we are free to leave the

American Dream
Ms. Sue
How did you get to be a doctor?

Ms. Sue
I suggest you use only the 1st and 6th paragraphs. They sound like YOU wrote them. Then take a few facts from the other paragraphs and write them in your own words.

I just realized that when you copied the last sentence, you left one or more words out. It doesn't make any sense.