Here’s the revised story pyramid for The Pearl by John Steinbeck based on your corrections:
- Kino
- Determined, hopeful
- Coastal, indigenous, impoverished
- Desires better life for family
- Discovers the pearl of great price
- Kino kills a man, fleeing with Juana
- Kino and Juana endure loss of child
- Kino relinquishes the pearl to the sea
This structure addresses the specific requirements you outlined for each section while maintaining a concise and vivid description of the plot.