Asked by gouri

Is this sentence correct.

While at home, I regretted the expensive purchase,I vowed to return one of the sweaters.

Answers

Answered by Ellie
You should either put a period after the word purchase and make two separate sentences, or you should make the statement read, "While at home, I regretted the expensive purchase, so I vowed to return one of the sweaters." Hope this helps! :)
Answered by Writeacher
Ellie is right. =)
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