Asked by rfvv
Q: Which role will you be good at?
1. I think I will be good at the role of the bow, for I can keep the balance of the boat.
2. I think I will be good at the role of the middle four rowers, for I am very strong. I can do my best to make the boat go fast.
3. I think I will be good at the role of the stroke, for I can set the stroke rate and rhythm.
4. I think I will be good at the role of the cox, for I can not only guide the boat but also motivate the rowers.
(Are the passages all grammatical? Would yoiu correct them, plese? Thank you..)
1. I think I will be good at the role of the bow, for I can keep the balance of the boat.
2. I think I will be good at the role of the middle four rowers, for I am very strong. I can do my best to make the boat go fast.
3. I think I will be good at the role of the stroke, for I can set the stroke rate and rhythm.
4. I think I will be good at the role of the cox, for I can not only guide the boat but also motivate the rowers.
(Are the passages all grammatical? Would yoiu correct them, plese? Thank you..)
Answers
Answered by
Damon
The only problem I have with these sentences is that they are extremely awkward.
I would have said:
I think I will be a good bow rower because I can balance the boat accurately.
I think I will be good rowing in the middle of the boat because I am strong and can make the boat move fast.
I think I will be a good stroke oar, for I can set the stroke rate and rhythm.
I think I will be a good coxswain because I can steer the boat and motivate the rowers.
I would have said:
I think I will be a good bow rower because I can balance the boat accurately.
I think I will be good rowing in the middle of the boat because I am strong and can make the boat move fast.
I think I will be a good stroke oar, for I can set the stroke rate and rhythm.
I think I will be a good coxswain because I can steer the boat and motivate the rowers.
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