Posted by rfvv on Saturday, September 13, 2014 at 4:20am.
1. Each team in the Boat Race has eight rowers and one more person who does not row, a cox.
2. Each team in the Boat Race is composed of eight rowers and one more person who does not row, a cox.
3. Each team in the Boat Race comprises eight rowers and one more person who does not row, a cox.
4. Each team in the Boat Race consists of eight rowers and one more person who does not row, a cox.
5. Each team in the Boat Race has eight rowers and a cox, one more person who does not row.
6. Each team in the Boat Race has eight rowers and a cox, a person who does not row.
(Are they all the same in meaning? Which one is commonly used? And which one is better, Sentence 5 or Sentence 6?)
Damon ... again! - Writeacher, Saturday, September 13, 2014 at 8:36am
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English - Damon, Saturday, September 13, 2014 at 6:20pm
I would pick (6).
However if I were writing it I would say:
Each shell has eight rowers and a coxswain who does not row but steers the boat while keeping the rowers working together.
I don't know the rowing terminology!
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As for the other question:
1. is fine although there is much more to being a good coxswain.
I would pick 2-2 because it is specific about why you want the big strong guys in the middle.
3. fine
4. fine.
1. is fine although there is much more to being a good coxswain.
I would pick 2-2 because it is specific about why you want the big strong guys in the middle.
3. fine
4. fine.
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