What's the difference between "out of work" and "completely out of work"?
And how can you avoid having "work" appear so soon after two instances of "workers"?
You could write this:
At the zenith of the Great Depression, nearly 25 percent of all workers, including 37 percent of non-farm workers, had no jobs.
Please help me word this sentence correctly:
At its zenith, the depression saw nearly 25 percent of all workers and 37 percent of all non-farm workers completely out of work.
I'm trying to say that at the peak of the depression, that's how many people were out of work.
I feel like it's confusing/I'm not conveying my message properly. Can you help me word this sentence better? Thank you!
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