Question

What type of introduction and conclusion will be effective for an essay titled "dress codes in schools".
thanks
Ms. Sue
The introduction and conclusion depends upon your intended audience and whether you're advocating a course of action. A formal petition to the school board, for example, would be different than an essay addressed to students.
Writeacher
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/writeintro.html

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/conclude.html

Let us know what you come up with and someone here will be happy to comment on your work.
I'll do that now, thank you.
Many students and their parents feel that enforcing dress codes in schools infringes upon the constitutional rights of the students.While there may be opposition from students and parents, dress codes should be enforced in schools as they encourage discipline among students.

What do you think about my intro?
Writeacher
It's OK, minimal.

You need a "hook" -- something attention-catching that makes the reader want to keep reading. That's missing from your two-sentence statement. Here are some more ideas for you:

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/intro.html

Thank you. I'll revise and repost.

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