Question
Both Egypt and Mesopotamia developed an organized government that consisted of one ruler maintaining order, but Egypt had a centralized authority while Mesopotamian political powers was more distributed among all the city-states.
This is a topic sentence to a paragraph. can you help me put this in a better clarifying sentence. I was wondering if i could put a semicolon in there somewhere.
This is a topic sentence to a paragraph. can you help me put this in a better clarifying sentence. I was wondering if i could put a semicolon in there somewhere.
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Writeacher
You've added too many details for this to be a topic sentence for one paragraph. Just write this:
Ancient Egypt and Mesopotamia had very different types of governments.
The details belong in the supporting sentences, not the topic sentence.
Ancient Egypt and Mesopotamia had very different types of governments.
The details belong in the supporting sentences, not the topic sentence.