Asked by Victoria
How should I revise this sentence?
"Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
"Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
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Answered by
TTR+S<3
Odysseus and his men washed up on a peculiar island after battling their way through sea storms. The strange island was property of the Lotus Eaters which the three men had found out and they continue to find out more about this strange new island.
the last part of the last sentence is a little skittish, so you can edit that:)
the last part of the last sentence is a little skittish, so you can edit that:)
Answered by
Writeacher
I would simply separate it into two sentences after "Lotus Eaters" and delete the following "and."
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