Question

I have an essay and this is one part of my thesis...

"In the nineteenth century, some ways the middle class participated in revolutions was by establishing liberalism, one way was through literature, and through the revolutions of 1848."

I wasn't sure if the "one way was through literature" should be in parenthesis or something else. I was thinking that parenthesis were too informal, but I am not positive. Would parenthesis work in this formal essay or should I use commas or some other punctuation?

Thanks!

Answer 1

Never mind, I have received an answer to this, thank you