How should I revise my answer?

Question

These questions regard the poem "Jabberwocky."

1. One critic said that "Jabberwocky," despite its odd language, tells a story like many legends of knights and dragons. Do you agree? Why or why not?

A: I agree with this critic’s opinion because, like in every tale of a knight facing whatever vile creature people fear, “Jabberwocky,” despite its odd language, is about facing your demons.

Answer 1

I see no change after my comments here: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1393784330

...answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."