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How can place (i chose house) can shaped you?How can it changed your identity?

I NEED JUST IDEAS TO BEGIN MY ESSAY.

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How has your house shaped you? Di
d any house change your identity?

You must begin this essay by brainstorming.

After you have some ideas what you want to say, write a tentative thesis statement.

Then make an outline of the major points that support that statement.

After you've done that, post your thesis and outline, and I'll help you from there.
Thesis-The house that I lived in thoght me how to be an independent.
taught

an independent _______
person
http://www.time4writing.com/writing-resources/step-by-step-guide-to-writing-an-essay/
so my thesis isn't good.
Your thesis is fine. Now keep working as Ms. Sue instructed you above. The step-by-step guide that I linked will help you.
ohk. thanks