Asked by Reina B.

i have to write an essay on theodore roosevelt

the question is


theodore roosevelt the first modern president.



outline:

i think it should be

1. introduction


2. view of presidency


3. regulating big business


4. environmental conservation


5. conclusion.
Answered by bobpursley
I don't understand what you are needing by posting this.
Answered by Reina B.
umm well just to guide me through i guess
Answered by bobpursley
I sense you have no idea what you want to say. Your outline is nouns. What do you mean by view of presidency? I suggest you write topical sentences in your outline. You have to know what you want to say, without that, you are lost and asking someone to guide you.

Do that.

Then, start writing (except introduction). before you write the conclusion, reread what you wrote. Does it have a thread? Is there somthing that ties those topics together about being a modern President? If so, make a conclusion. Then Proof it.
Then go to your introduction. Think kout what your thesis is. Then write the introduction and thesis sentence. Then reread each paragraph and ask "Does this support the thesis?".

Writing is an inter-active activity.
Answered by bobpursley
One other point Writeacher made, you need to clearly state what a "modern" President is. Are presidents since Roosevelt "modern", or what?
Answered by Reina B.
A modern president is what he did differently then the other presidents.
Answered by Reina B.
so what can be some topic i can write about him?
Answered by bobpursley
My lord, Reina, do what I suggested. You are wasting time thinking of what else I could do.
Answered by bobpursley
You might think about the that big stick he talked about also.
Answered by Reina B.
you said my outlines were nouns correct?

i am asking what can i put so i can start drafting
Answered by Reina B.
view of presindency
1. taking office
2. coal strike of 1902
3. square deal
Answered by bobpursley
Why are you leaning on me to tell you what to write? Did God give you the power to think, analyze, and create ideas? I think you have all the tools you need, but you are reluctant to use them. It is called thinking. Stop wavering and vacillating (look those words up). You can start this on your own.

One thing: you did not actually say what the assignment is, as is it a full blown research paper (10+ pages), or a five paragraph essay? You need to think that out, so you actually do the assignment.
Answered by Reina B.
umm idk she only said to write an essay on tr modern president.

Answered by Reina B.
and idk what topic to write about him
Answered by Writeacher
Focus on TR as the first pres to work on conservation.

-- conservation of what?
-- how did he focus?
-- what were the results?
Answered by Reina B.
of the environment and the people, businesses
Answered by Writeacher
Start researching and writing.

Stop wasting time posting here.

Get busy!!
Answered by Writeacher
Read, read, read ... and take notes.

http://www.google.com/search?q=theodore+roosevelt&oq=theodore&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0j69i65j0l3.4698j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
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