1. Yes, the data franchise owner is collecting, will be helpful to counter the criticism from the critic. As he has a record for every delivery they are making daily.

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2. The scenario is that for every fifth customer, the owner crosses the four lines he makes. Thus a pack of five and easy to remember. As the data on regular weekdays is less, As can do the same for the third customer. Crossing the 2 lines for 3rd customer.

3. With this provision of crossing the third customer, the owner can have a better check on the late delivery. As it will bring in his notice earlier as compared to the fifth crossing.

4. With the data as provided in the table, we can conclude that on weekends, i.e. both on-time delivery and late deliveries are high in numbers. It must be because of the high demand on those days. So the owner must make some provision like hiring some more delivery boys for the weekend to reduce the late deliveries.
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Answer 1

1. Yes, the data which the franchise owner is collecting will be helpful to counter the criticism from the critic. As he has a record for every delivery they are making daily.
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2. The scenario is that, for every fifth customer, the owner crosses the four lines he makes. Thus a pack of five and easy to remember. As the data on regular weekdays is less, As can do the same for the third customer. Crossing the 2 lines for 3rd customer.
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Once you fix those and similar/identical things in the other two, I might check again. You are making the same types of errors, so you need to find and fix them, too.

Answer 2

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