The only changes I'd suggest involve this phrasing: "is wearing a scarf on her hair."
It should be either "on her head" or "over her hair" but not a mix of the two.
Everything else reads fine. Nice!
1. What do you think it is? I think it is a duck. No, I don't think so. I thinks it is a chick. I don't agree with you. I think it is a rabbit. I think you can regard it as a duck, a rabbit or a chick.
2. What do you think it is? (Pointing to a photo on the right.) I think it is an old woman. Why do you think so. Look. This is her left ear. This is her eyelash. And this is her white scarf. The woman with black hair is wearing a scarf on her hair. I don't think so. I think it is an old woman. This is her left eye. This is her nose and this is her mouth. The old woman is wearing a scarf on her hair. It can be seen as a young woman or an old woman. We can see both a young woman and an old woman in one picture. Isn't it a little strange?
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Would you take a look at the passage above and correct any errors? Thank you.
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