1 and 3 are best. All the rest are wordy or incorrect.
In 4 and 5, the pronoun "it" seems to be referring to the photo (singular), not the the comments (plural).
1. She found her photo with a lot of comments, making fun of her pose.
2. She found her photo with a lot of comments, which were making fun of her pose.
3. She found her photo with a lot of comments, which made fun of her pose.
4. She found her photo with a lot of comments, and it were making fun of her pose.
5. She found her photo with a lot of comments, and it made fun of her pose.
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#1 is the original sentence. What about the others? Are the others the same in meaning? Would you check them, please? Does 'it' refer to 'her photo with a lot of comments'?
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