1. It was his fault that he didn't put a leash on his dog. OK
2. He should have walked his dog with a leash on. With a leash on what? His belt? The dog's collar? Or what?
3. He should have walked the dog with a leash on his collar. OK
4. It was his mistake that his didn't tie the lead to the dog's collar. He should have used a dog lead. I made changes.
5. By mistake, he didn't put the dog on a lead. A dog lead should be put on a dog outside. OK
6. He didn't keep an eye on the pet when they went for a walk. They were busy talking with each other. OK, mostly, but who are "They"?
1. It was his fault that he didn't put a leash on his dog.
2. He should have walked his dog with a leash on.
3. He should have walked the dog with a leash on his collar.
4. It was his mistake that his didn't tie his dog to the collar. He should have used a dog lead.
5. By mistake, he didn't prepared a dog lead. A dog lead should be put on a dog outside.
6. He didn't keep an eye on the pet when they went for a walk. They were busy talking with each other.
(Would you check the sentences? Thank you.)
2 answers
In #4, "his" should be "he."