1. Her husband, a kind, quiet gentleman, worked for HHS's public relations department.

2. Her husband, a kind quiet gentleman, worked for HHSs public relations department.

Question:
choose the sentence that is written and punctuated correctly.
50 - 50 I choose #1. flows better.

1 answer

You're right.

A rough rule-of-thumb when you have two adjectives together: Put a comma between them if you could also use "and" between them.