To make the diagram of the fire pit more effective, the following three revisions would be beneficial:
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Including images for each step of the process - Visual aids can greatly enhance understanding and retention, allowing users to better follow the instructions and visualize the construction of the fire pit.
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Adding a label to indicate the depth of the fire pit - Clearly marking the depth can help ensure that users achieve the correct dimensions, making the construction process more precise.
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Including labels for all materials mentioned - Identifying each material used in the process helps users gather the correct supplies and understand the function of each component in the fire pit construction.
These revisions will improve clarity and usability, facilitating a better DIY experience for the reader.